The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008.
The two bar charts give information about 4 distinct types of activity except full-time
work
, which Use synonyms
taken
by UK graduate and postgraduate Add a missing verb
was taken
students
after graduation in 2008.
At a glance, both graduate and postgraduate Use synonyms
students
in Use synonyms
UK
preferred to pursue their studies after leaving college, whilst the minority in both Correct article usage
the UK
Use synonyms
students
Change noun form
student's
students'
level
were on Fix the agreement mistake
levels
the
voluntary Correct article usage
apply
works
.
In regard to the UK graduate Fix the agreement mistake
work
students
, the highest number was 29, 665 people, who decided to continue their study to the next level. Use synonyms
Next,
the second and third Linking Words
position
were part-time Change the noun form
positions
work
and unemployment, which were experienced by 17,735 and 16,235 Use synonyms
students
respectively. Following that, the 3,500 Use synonyms
of
Change preposition
apply
students
opted to be volunteers.
In terms of what postgraduate Use synonyms
students
did after done their college, there were two preferable destinations: pursuing their studies and Use synonyms
Use synonyms
work in
Correct your spelling
working
part time
. The former number Add a hyphen
part-time
was
stood at 2,725 people and the latter was 2,535 people. Unnecessary verb
apply
Subsequently
, 1,625 postgraduate Linking Words
students
became unemployed after Use synonyms
finish
their Change the verb form
finishing
study
. Fix the agreement mistake
studies
Lastly
, the lowest option Linking Words
from
these Change preposition
for
students
was Use synonyms
Use synonyms
work
as a volunteer, which was only 345 of them.Fix the infinitive
to work
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