The pie charts give information about the proportoin males and females in employment in six categories divided into manualand non-manual occupations

These pie charts illustrate the percentage of male and female employees, who engaged in six different categories of either automated or labour-oriented jobs.

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, if the sum total of workers

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considered,

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of the men were assigned to do manual jobs,

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most of the women were involved in non-manual occupations. As for the general labouring tasks, not more than 2% of either gender took part .

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3% of the women practised all things pertaining

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, 24% of their counterparts were involved. The proportion of either

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who were involved in other manual occupations

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relatively the same with one exceeding the other only by a percentage. More male employees were engaged in managerial and professional duties

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36% more than the female workers.

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, 31% of the female workers were clerks and only 6% of the opposite sex, occupied

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position.