The diagram below shows various stages involved in the production of beer.
The illustration presents an overview of the key stages involved in the manufacturing of beer from three main steps namely processing, packaging and delivering
Looking from an
overall
perspective, it is evident that there are nine stages in the production of beer, starting with the milling of malted barley and culminating with the delivery of beers to customers.
The whole process
of beer starts when the malted barley has been milled in order to be broken down into small pieces. After
this
particular stage
has finished, the ingredients have been mashed with the supplement of water. Once this
particular stage
in the manufacturing process
has been completed, it is then
followed by being lautered, a process
which results in spent grain animal feed. It Is at this
particular point that the ingredients are put into high-temperature water with the addition of sugar and hops. After
this
particular stage
has finished, it is moved into a whirlpool. Once the ingredient adding
yeast is fermented and emits Co2 Add a hyphen
ingredient-adding
as well as
weeds out yeast, it undergoes a
manufacturing.
Remove the article
apply
Subsequently
, a penultimate stage
in which filtering is carried out. It then
leads to the final stage
of the process
where the ingredients have been packed in the form of either bottles or cans before being delivered to the market.Submitted by thvana236 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "after this".
▼
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
▼
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
▼
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
▼
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words process, stage with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
▼
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
▼
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
▼
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
▼