The first chart below shows the percentages of women and men in a country involved in some kinds of home tasks (cooking, cleaning, pet caring and repairing the house. The second chart shows the amount of time each gender spent on each task per day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given chart shows
that
the average of Correct word choice
apply
males
and females
in a country who are involved in some kinds of household task like cooking, cleaning, and many things on every day
Overall
, Compared to males
females
had the highest percentage in both household work and average time
on household work. The pet care was literally the same in both males
and females
.
Firstly
, In cooking females
had 80 percent
and where Change the spelling
per cent
males
had only 60 percent
and Change the spelling
per cent
females
had the highest average time
than males
. When it comes to cleaning the females
play a main role where they had 70 percent
and Change the spelling
per cent
males
had only 45 percent
and the average Change the spelling
per cent
time
was a little higher than males
.
Both females
and males
played a
equal role in pet care which was 20 Change the article
an
percent
. In house repairs the males
had a higher percentage than females
, they spent 20 per cent of the average time
repairing housework whereas
females
only worked 10 percent
on average Change the spelling
per cent
time
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words males, females, time, percent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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