On a recent holiday, you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of the lost item. Write a letter to the insurance manager. In your letter: describe the item you lost, explain how you lost it, tell the insurance company what you would like them to do.

Dear
sir
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/
madam manager
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Madam Manager
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, I am writing
this
letter to inform
that
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you that
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l
lost my
bag
at
bali
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Bali
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airport yesterday. I told the
airlines
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airline
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company that my
bag
lost
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was lost
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, and they
was
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were
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searching on
plane
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the plane
a plane
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, but unfortunately my
bag
did
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was
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not
find
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found
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. My
bag
is important to me because It has a laptop and a handphone which it is expensive things. My
bag
color
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colour
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is navy and have a bottle
mineral
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of mineral
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on
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in
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right
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the right
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bag
pocket
then
my laptop and my handphone have
same
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the same
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color
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is black
color
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.  I brought my
bag
on
plane
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the plane
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with me
then
steward
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the steward
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told me that
l
should put my
bag
on
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in
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cabin
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the cabin
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because the
plane
was full, and
l
approved. When the
plane
arrived,
l
searched
my
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for my
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bag
on
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in
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cabin
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the cabin
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but,
l
did't
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didn't
find it.
Therefore
,
my
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if my
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bag
does
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is
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not
find
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found
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then
l
decide
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decided
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to report my
suffer lost
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suffering loss
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and claim it to your company. I want to know what document's claim should
l
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apply
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brings
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bring
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to your office, so my claim is fast in process. I am looking
your
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apply
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forward soon.
Thankyou
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Thank you
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.
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Yours
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Your
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Yours
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faithfully, Andrianto
raharja
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maharaja
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Coherence & Cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph has a clear central idea and that the transitions between paragraphs are smooth. Avoid abrupt changes in topic.
Coherence & Cohesion
Consistently use appropriate formal greetings and sign-offs in your letters. 'Dear Sir/Madam,' and 'Yours faithfully,' are suitable, but ensure they are formatted correctly with commas and capitalization.
Task Achievement
Directly address all three bullet points in the task with equal development. While you did mention the item lost and the desired action, more detail on how you lost the item could enhance the response.
Task Achievement
Maintain a formal tone throughout the letter; avoid casual language and contractions. Additionally, check your writing for grammatical accuracy and clarity.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • valuable item
  • travel insurance
  • insurance manager
  • reimbursement
  • coverage policy
  • preventive measures
  • sentimental value
  • monetary value
  • swift resolution
  • reimbursement
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