On a recent holiday, you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of the lost item. Write a letter to the insurance manager. In your letter: describe the item you lost, explain how you lost it, tell the insurance company what you would like them to do.
Dear
sir
/Capitalize word
Sir
madam manager
,
I am writing Correct your spelling
Madam Manager
this
letter to inform that
Correct pronoun usage
you that
l
lost my bag
at bali
airport yesterday. I told the Change the capitalization
Bali
airlines
company that my Change the noun form
airline
bag
lost
, and they Add a missing verb
was lost
was
searching on Change the verb form
were
plane
, but unfortunately my Add an article
the plane
a plane
bag
did
not Verb problem
was
find
.
My Wrong verb form
found
bag
is important to me because It has a laptop and a handphone which it is expensive things. My bag
color
is navy and have a bottle Change the spelling
colour
mineral
Change preposition
of mineral
on
Change preposition
in
right
Correct article usage
the right
bag
pocket then
my laptop and my handphone have same
Change the article
the same
color
is black Change the spelling
colour
color
.
I brought my Change the spelling
colour
bag
on plane
with me Add an article
the plane
then
steward
told me that Correct article usage
the steward
l
should put my bag
on
Change preposition
in
cabin
because the Correct article usage
the cabin
plane
was full, and l
approved. When the plane
arrived, l
searched my
Change preposition
for my
bag
on
Change preposition
in
cabin
but, Correct article usage
the cabin
l
did't
find it.
Correct your spelling
didn't
Therefore
, my
Correct word choice
if my
bag
does
not Verb problem
is
find
Wrong verb form
found
then
l
decide
to report my Wrong verb form
decided
suffer lost
and claim it to your company. I want to know what document's claim should Replace the word
suffering loss
l
Correct pronoun usage
apply
brings
to your office, so my claim is fast in process.
I am looking Correct subject-verb agreement
bring
your
forward soon. Correct pronoun usage
apply
Thankyou
.
Correct your spelling
Thank you
Correct the word
Yours
Your
faithfully,
Andrianto Correct your spelling
Yours
raharja
Correct your spelling
maharaja
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Coherence & Cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph has a clear central idea and that the transitions between paragraphs are smooth. Avoid abrupt changes in topic.
Coherence & Cohesion
Consistently use appropriate formal greetings and sign-offs in your letters. 'Dear Sir/Madam,' and 'Yours faithfully,' are suitable, but ensure they are formatted correctly with commas and capitalization.
Task Achievement
Directly address all three bullet points in the task with equal development. While you did mention the item lost and the desired action, more detail on how you lost the item could enhance the response.
Task Achievement
Maintain a formal tone throughout the letter; avoid casual language and contractions. Additionally, check your writing for grammatical accuracy and clarity.
Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.
‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.
Examples:
I really want to study but I’m too tired.
I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.
If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.
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