The first chart below shows the percentages of women and men in a country involved in some kinds of home tasks (cooking, cleaning, pet caring and repairing the house. The second chart shows the amount of time each gender spent on each task per day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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Given are two bar charts depicting the proportion and the average times of
women
and men involved in some kind of house tasks which are cooking, cleaning, pet care and house repairs.
It is clear from the charts that the share of women
are engaged in cooking and cleaning and the time
they spend in these is also
higher than the men’s.
As per the chart, over 80% of women
are involved in cooking, which is more than 20% than
men’s involvement. The Change preposition
of
time
they spend in this
is also
almost equal as
their Change preposition
to
participation
rate (Over 80 minutes
when compared to 60 minutes
).
In cleaning works
too, Fix the agreement mistake
work
females
beats
males, both in Change the verb form
beat
participation
and in the
Correct article usage
apply
time
. When over 60% of women
do this
work, in case
of men, it is 20% less. Correct article usage
the case
Similarly
, when an average of 70 minutes
is spent on this
activity by females
, only 50 minutes
are spent by men each day.
In case
of pet care, both genders have very similar Correct article usage
the case
participation
, and the time
they involve
in Wrong verb form
are involved
this
activity is almost equal (20% and 20 minutes
respectively).However
, male participation
is almost double than
that of Change preposition
apply
females
(around 10%) in house repairs and the duration they spend on it is almost thrice more than that of females
(approximately 5 minutes
).Submitted by ru.kabiru.biru on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words women, time, participation, minutes, females with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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