The first chart below shows the percentages of women and men in a country involved in some kinds of home tasks (cooking, cleaning, pet caring and repairing the house. The second chart shows the amount of time each gender spent on each task per day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The data given presenting two different bar charts respectively inform the percentage of
males
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females
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in
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particular
country who do chores (cooking, cleaning, Add an article
a particular
pet
care, and house repairs) and the average Use synonyms
time
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women
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men
in Use synonyms
minutes
per day for each different Use synonyms
task
.
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Overall
, both charts present the information that Linking Words
women
dominate the Use synonyms
task
and Use synonyms
spending
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spend
time
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for
cooking and cleaning the house Change preposition
apply
while
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men
are into Use synonyms
hourse
repairs over Correct your spelling
house
horse
hours
women
. Use synonyms
Besides
, Linking Words
males
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females
share the same amount of proportion and average Use synonyms
time
for Use synonyms
pet
caring.
In regard to the percentage of housework, Use synonyms
females
show domination over Use synonyms
males
in cooking and cleaning at 80 Use synonyms
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percent
, and 60 Change the spelling
per cent
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percent
, respectively. Change the spelling
per cent
While
the two Linking Words
sharing
fair Replace the word
share
task
to Use synonyms
pet
caring as 20 Use synonyms
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percent
, Change the spelling
per cent
men
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spents
more proportion in Correct your spelling
spend
hourse
repairs over Correct your spelling
house
hours
women
at 20 Use synonyms
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percent
.
Domination over Change the spelling
per cent
men
to clean and cook by Use synonyms
women
, Use synonyms
it
automatically contributed more Correct pronoun usage
apply
time
to those Use synonyms
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task
at roughly 85 Fix the agreement mistake
tasks
minutes
, and 65 Use synonyms
minutes
respectively. Use synonyms
Whereas
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men
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spending
more Wrong verb form
spent
time
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in
repairing Change preposition
apply
house
at 20 Correct article usage
the house
minutes
each day, Use synonyms
males
and Use synonyms
females
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kept
the same 20 Verb problem
spent
minutes
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in
a day Change preposition
apply
to do
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doing
a
Remove the article
apply
pet
care.Use synonyms
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