The first chart below shows the percentages of women and men in a country involved in some kinds of home tasks (cooking, cleaning, pet caring and repairing the house. The second chart shows the amount of time each gender spent on each task per day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The data given presenting two different bar charts respectively inform the percentage of
males
and females
in
particular
country who do chores (cooking, cleaning, Add an article
a particular
pet
care, and house repairs) and the average time
women
and men
in minutes
per day for each different task
.
Overall
, both charts present the information that women
dominate the task
and spending
Replace the word
spend
time
for
cooking and cleaning the house Change preposition
apply
while
men
are into hourse
repairs over Correct your spelling
house
horse
hours
women
. Besides
, males
and females
share the same amount of proportion and average time
for pet
caring.
In regard to the percentage of housework, females
show domination over males
in cooking and cleaning at 80 percent
, and 60 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
, respectively. Change the spelling
per cent
While
the two sharing
fair Replace the word
share
task
to pet
caring as 20 percent
, Change the spelling
per cent
men
spents
more proportion in Correct your spelling
spend
hourse
repairs over Correct your spelling
house
hours
women
at 20 percent
.
Domination over Change the spelling
per cent
men
to clean and cook by women
, it
automatically contributed more Correct pronoun usage
apply
time
to those task
at roughly 85 Fix the agreement mistake
tasks
minutes
, and 65 minutes
respectively. Whereas
men
spending
more Wrong verb form
spent
time
in
repairing Change preposition
apply
house
at 20 Correct article usage
the house
minutes
each day, males
and females
kept
the same 20 Verb problem
spent
minutes
in
a day Change preposition
apply
to do
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doing
a
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apply
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