The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the percentage of greenhouse gas emissions that result from this energy use
The two pie charts illustrate
energy
consumption, and as a result
, the greenhouse
gas
release in an average Australian household. Energy
is mainly utilized in six distinct areas, namely heating, cooling, water heating, lighting, refrigeration, and other electrical appliances. Overall
, the most striking part would be that 42% of the energy
usage is due to
heating which is the greatest segment, however
, this
segment is responsible for just 15% of the greenhouse
gas
release. Additionally
, it is noticeable that the slightest slice of the chart is allocated to cooling utilization with only 2%, as well as
3% in the latter chart. Additionally
, no connection can be seen between energy
usage and greenhouse
gas
emissions. Furthermore
, 7% of energy
usage belongs to refrigeration, whereas
this
amount is doubled in greenhouse
gas
emissions, unlike the amount of water heating which is significantly the same in both chartsSubmitted by maryam.niknamm on
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