The pie charts below show the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities in a particular country in 1958 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The pie charts compare information about the percentage of a variety of activities spent time by adults
such
as working, relaxing at home, sleeping, travelling to Linking Words
work
, going out, other interests or playing sports in a particular country in 1958 and 2008. As can be seen from the charts, it is obvious that most people tended to Use synonyms
work
in 1958 and 2008.
In detail, the majority of adults chose to Use synonyms
work
with 33 per Use synonyms
cent
in 1958, and Use synonyms
then
the number of working increased to 42 per Linking Words
cent
in 2008. Use synonyms
In contrast
, people who waste time sleeping decreased by 25 Linking Words
percent
in 2008 from 1985 with 32 per Change the spelling
per cent
cent
. Use synonyms
Also
, there is a considerable decline in the number of going out from 19 per Linking Words
cent
to just 6 per Use synonyms
cent
.
If we look at other adults who have other interests or play sports, travel to Use synonyms
work
, and relax just slightly rise.
In conclusion, apart from sleeping and going out, the number of others grew from 1958 to 2008.Use synonyms
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