The pie charts below show the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities in a particular country in 1958 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The pie charts compare information about the percentage of a variety of activities spent time by adults

such

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as working, relaxing at home, sleeping, travelling to

work

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, going out, other interests or playing sports in a particular country in 1958 and 2008. As can be seen from the charts, it is obvious that most people tended to

work

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in 1958 and 2008. In detail, the majority of adults chose to

work

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with 33 per

cent

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in 1958, and

then

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the number of working increased to 42 per

cent

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in 2008.

In contrast

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, people who waste time sleeping decreased by 25

percent

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in 2008 from 1985 with 32 per

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, there is a considerable decline in the number of going out from 19 per

cent

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to just 6 per

cent

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. If we look at other adults who have other interests or play sports, travel to

work

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, and relax just slightly rise. In conclusion, apart from sleeping and going out, the number of others grew from 1958 to 2008.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words work, cent with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

168 words

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In many countries, the governmnet only emphasizes economic growth, discuss the advantages and disadvantages of it.

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