The chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among different age groups of residents in the UK in 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among different age groups of residents in the UK in 2004. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The graph illustrates the percentage of costs that five
groups
of UK
people
spent on three categories (beverage, accommodation and entertainment) in 2004.
Overall
, the proportion of the expenditure which
were
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allocated to food and drink was generally highest in
groups
of
people
who were 31-45, 46-60 and over 76
years
old. Meanwhile, that of restaurant and hotel was highest in
group
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a group
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of residents who
was
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were
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under 30
years
old and lowest in the
group
of citizens who was 61-75
years
old.
While
people
who were under 30
years
old spent around 6% of their budget on food and drink, the figures for
group
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groups
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of residents who were 31-45 and 46-60
years
old were higher as much twice and three times , with respective ones being about 12% and 18%. These numbers of elder
people
(61-75 and over 76) even were higher, at 20% and 24%. Three
groups
of residents who were under 60
years
old said that they cost around 13% of their amount to
accommocation
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accommodation
accommodations
, compared to 3% in the
group
of 61-75
years
old and 6% in the
group
of over 76
years
old. The share of the cost of recreational activities in the
groups
of
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under 30 and 31-45
years
old was the same (approximately 7%).
Similarly
, that of
group
46-60 and over 76 was 14%
whereas
that of elderly inhabitants who were 61-75 was up to 23%.
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