Some people feel that manufacturers and supermarkets have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging of goods. Others argue that customers should avoid buying goods with a lot of packaging. Discuss both views and give your opinions.

There are discussions around whether

manufacturers

and stores or

customers

should be responsible for the problem of

over packaged

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products.

While

some may argue that only

factories

and

supermarkets

can change the amount of

package

used, I believe that

customers

should have greater responsibility as the high sales of

such

goods

is the ultimate reason why

manufacturers

are producing them. Proponents of the former view Without a doubt,

factories

and

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stores are the ones who

package

the

goods

. When they receive the base product, it is up to them to decide how much wrappings should be used.

For example

, fruits and vegetables are transported to

supermarkets

in their rawest forms, and

then

they are packaged with excessive plastic wrappings and stickers. So, some may think that only

factories

and stores can solve the problem because it is

them

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who

package

the items.

However

, it is my belief that the needs

from

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customers

are the ultimate reason for the large amount of wrapped items.

Manufacturers

need to pay extra expenses for more packaging, and they are willing to do so because

such

products sell better.

For instance

, a survey has found

out

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that when consumers are given the

choices

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of products with minimal packaging or

over packaged

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commodities, most of them will choose the latter one as it is fancier. If

customers

prefer items with minimal packaging

more

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,

factories

and

supermarkets

will naturally

package

their

goods

less as overpackaging will damage their sales. In conclusion,

although

manufacturers

and

supermarkets

are the ones who produce

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goods

, I believe that consumers are responsible for the problem as their need for excessive packaging is the primary reason for

this

burning issue.