The line graph illustrates the proportion of tourists to England who attended four different attractions in Brighton.
The line graph displays the percentage of travellers to England, who attended four various attractions,
such
as art galleries, pavilions, piers and festivals between 1980 and 2010 Linking Words
years
.
Substantially, the most well-liked attraction by tourists was pavilions for the biggest part of the given period. Use synonyms
In contrast
, the least popular were piers for 25 out of 30 Linking Words
years
.
The festival category was the most visited in the first given year. It has a static graph throughout the whole term, which is approximately 30%. Use synonyms
On the contrary
, the Linking Words
pavilions
line is unstable. At Change the noun form
pavilion
first,
in 1980 Linking Words
percentage
was nearly 25%, Correct article usage
the percentage
then
there was a dramatic surge up to almost 50% in 1995. In the following Linking Words
years
, the proportion slightly decreased and ended up at 30% in 2010. Use synonyms
The attendance
at art galleries was the most trendy among others in 1985, which was roughly 40%. Correct article usage
Attendance
However
, in the next two decades, the percentage markedly declined to less than 10%. The Linking Words
last
and the least favoured category is piers, which rarely exceeded 10%, Linking Words
although
in the Linking Words
last
5 Linking Words
years
, it had steadily risen up to merely over 20%.
Use synonyms
To sum up
, all attractions changed their position at the top through the Linking Words
years
.Use synonyms
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