The graph below shows population figures for India and China since the year 2000 and predicted population growth up until 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates the
number
of inhabitants since 2000 and expected
population growth until 2050 in two big countries Correct article usage
the expected
China
and India
.
Overall
, India
's population has grown, is growing and is expected to grow in the future, while
in China
the number
of people will gradually decrease despite the little rise.
At the beginning of 2000, India
had a population of 1.0 billion
and until 2020 the number
of people increased by half a billion
or 1 billion
every year. According to
conjectural data in the following years
Add a comma
years,
India
's inhabitants will enhance to 1.6 billion
in 2050. Furthermore
the biggest rise will occur from 2026 approximately to 2035 to 1.5 Add a comma
Furthermore,
billion
.
Since 2000, peoples
in Fix the agreement mistake
people
China
has
gradually increased from almost 1.3 to 1.4 until 2020. Correct subject-verb agreement
have
However
, China
is pridect
in the next Correct your spelling
predict
years
reduction in the Change to a genitive case
year's
years'
number
of people despite a small growth.Submitted by alima.arapova05 on
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, china, india, billion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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