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The graph below shows population figures for India and China since the year 2000 and predicted population growth up until 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows population figures for India and China since the year 2000 and predicted population growth up until 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph illustrates the
number
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 of inhabitants since 2000 and
expected
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the expected
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 population growth until 2050 in two big countries
China
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 and
India
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.
Overall
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,
India
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's population has grown, is growing and is expected to grow in the future,
while
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 in
China
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 the
number
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 of people will gradually decrease despite the little rise. At the beginning of 2000,
India
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 had a population of 1.0
billion
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 and until 2020 the
number
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 of people increased by half a
billion
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 or 1
billion
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 every year.
According to
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 conjectural data in the following
years
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years,
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India
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's inhabitants will enhance to 1.6
billion
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 in 2050.
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Furthermore
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 the biggest rise will occur from 2026 approximately to 2035 to 1.5
billion
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. Since 2000,
peoples
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people
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 in
China
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has
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have
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 gradually increased from almost 1.3 to 1.4 until 2020.
However
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,
China
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 is
pridect
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predict
 in the next
years
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year's
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 reduction in the
number
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 of people despite a small growth.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, china, india, billion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
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