Your child is going on a three-day school trip to another country. The head teacher wants to find parents to go with the group and you would like to go. Write a letter to the head teacher. In your letter: • Say why you would like to go on the trip • Suggest what you could do to help during the trip • Ask other questions about the trip
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing an inquiry letter for an educational tour.
Since my daughter had informed me about you were planning for children's
trip
. She was elated to go to Australia. Although
, I was bewildered to give permission to my child to go abroad, however
, I decided to go on her school trip
. I will go with him because she cannot take care of well
and cannot cook meals for Correct pronoun usage
herself well
three-day
tour.
I would like to share my thoughts with you on how I can help you during Add an article
a three-day
this
journey. I had been living for a couple of months with my parents then
I moved to another country. I may guide all students through the historical city of Sydney. The Sydney Harbour is one of the one of the world's greatest arch bridges. The Sydney Opera House is an immense building for tourists and many people love to visit this
place. Furthermore
, students will love these places while
on this
tour and acquire knowledge about history.
I want to ask some queries regarding this
trip
. First,
How much amount is required for three-day
Correct article usage
a three-day
trip
? Secondly
, what are essential documents required? Last
but not least, what are the arrival and departure times? Then
I can manage my important chores at home.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours Sincerely,Submitted by mobinadurrani43 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
greeting and closing
Ensure you use an appropriate salutation and closing in a formal letter, such as 'Dear Head Teacher' and 'Yours faithfully,' followed by your full name.
logical structure
Organize your letter into clear paragraphs, each serving a distinct purpose: introduction and intention to join, how you can help, and questions about the trip.
single idea per paragraph
Keep each paragraph on topic. The history of the Sydney Harbour and Opera House is not directly relevant to how you can assist on the trip.
task achievement
Address all parts of the prompt with focused and expanded ideas: why you want to go (your child's needs and your own reasons), how you can assist (concrete proposals of help), and raise relevant questions (specific to the trip's organization, not just cost and documents).