You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The pie charts below show the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities in a particular country in 1958 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant You should write at least 150 words.
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The graphs display the proportion of time to various activities by working adults in a specific country in both 1958 and 2008.
Overall
, people spent most of the
time Change the word
their
on
working in 1958 and Change preposition
apply
this
is expected to grown
even more in the future. Working continued to be significant in 2008 with a sharp increase, but all others fell to minimal levels.
In 1958, working had nearly a third of the Change the verb
grow
overall
share and this
was set to increase to nearly a
half of the total in 2008. The next biggest activity was sleeping with nearly working, with only around a 1% drop.
Going out was set to become the biggest loser with a loss of nearly 10%, from 19% to 8%. It was thought that sleeping would become the second Correct article usage
apply
popular
activity in 2008 with a drop of 32% to just 25%. Travel to work was projected to disappear with only 2% in 1958 but it Correct quantifier usage
most popular
became
to rise to 8% Verb problem
came
the
same level Change preposition
at the
with
other interests or playing sports.Change preposition
as
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".
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Vocabulary: The word "set" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "drop" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 4 times.
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