The line graph below shows the population size, birth rate and the death rate of England and Wales from 1700 to 2000. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph below shows the population size, birth rate and the death rate of England and Wales from 1700 to 2000. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph indicates that the population size is based on millions and
also
compares
birth
and
death
in stand pre 1000 people in two countries (Wales and England) between 1700 and 2000.
Overall
, in these three centuries, a trend that had dramatic movement was the population size which significantly boomed with short stability from 1750 to 1800 and the cases of
birth
and
death
were maintained at the same level for the period of time. The population's size continuously increased up to 45 million until 2000 but at one point it was held steady in the half of the 17 century and in the case of
birth
and
death
rates followed a similar trend from 1700 to 1950 and
then
the
birth
rates in minimally increase more than 30 pre-1000 people expect in 2000 but the trend of
death
rate
also
remain remains steady at 20 pre-1000 people between 1950 to 2000.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words birth, death with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 2 times.
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