The line graph illustrates the proportion of tourists to England who attended four different attractions in Brighton.
The provided line chart describes the percentage of foreigners who visited the United Kingdom in a span of 30 years from 1980 to 2010 who explored four tourist spots in Brighton.
According to
the given data, there were four types of attractions: the art gallery, the pavilion
, the pier , and the festival.
Overall
, after a thorough analysis of the given table chart, it can be plainly viewed that whereas
at the end
of the given period
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period,
pavilion
came in the
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apply
place
as the most commonly visited place
, the art gallery came last
.
In the beginning, concerning
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pavilion
, in 1980, located
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was located
place
as the most popular attraction among tourists ( hit
almost 26%). From 1985 to 1995, it witnessed a dramatic upsurge and reached its peak when it recorded approximately 39% in 1995, before hitting a free fall in 2000 ( scored about 32%).
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hitting
Furthermore
, moving to the pier, the percentage of the pier witnessed multiple fluctuations throughout the given duration. However
, in the year 2010, it came in third place
( hit slightly more than 21%) after the pavilion
and the festival which recorded around 31% and 28%, respectively. Moreover
, it is worth noticing that the art gallery over the course of 30 years experienced a significant decline to reach only about 9% in 2010, after registering up to 39% in 1985.Submitted by drfatima.abduallah on
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