You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The line chart below shows the results of a survey giving the reasons why people moved to the capital city of a particular country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The line graph depicts the changes of 4 reasons for why
people
moved to the capital city of a country in a 15
Correct your spelling
15-year
years
period from 2000 to 2015. The overall
trend for the period is of
an increase in the numbers moving away to the city.
Change preposition
apply
Overall
, the left bar of the graph shows the number of people
, while
the bar below represents the time. In general, employment was the main reason. But study
is the reason that increased the most. The Add an article
the study
last
2 reasons of moved
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for moving
because
of family/Add a missing verb
were because
friend
and Fix the agreement mistake
friends
moved
for adventure didn’t Verb problem
apply
changed
much over Change the verb form
change
years
.
First of all, employment cause started at nearly 60 Correct article usage
the years
thousands
in 2000, reached Change to singular
thousand
it’s
highest peak at 92 Correct your spelling
its
thousands
in 2010, but Change to singular
thousand
then
went down for
5,000 in the next 5 Change preposition
to
years
. Secondly
, Correct article usage
the moved
moved
for study Replace the word
move
beginned
at 25 Correct your spelling
beginning
beginner
thousands
in 2000, it rose Change to singular
thousand
up
strongly over the first 5 Change preposition
apply
year
, slowed down a bit in the middle phase, Change to a plural noun
years
then
continue
to Wrong verb form
continued
went
up dramatically for 30 Change the verb
go
thousands
Change to singular
thousand
people
from 2010 to 2015. Thirdly
, moved because of family/ friends beginned
at 10 Correct your spelling
beginning
thousands
, it increased gradually and Change to singular
thousand
then
stopped at 22 thousands
Change to singular
thousand
at
2010, after that it moved up stable for nearly only 1 thousand Change preposition
in
people
in the last
5 years
phase. Moved to capital cities because of adventure was the least in this
graph, which grew stabily
for 5 Correct your spelling
steadily
stability
thousands
over 15 Change to singular
thousand
years
.Submitted by k2englishcenter on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last, overall".
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Contractions: Don't use contractions.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, years, thousands with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "went down" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "moved" was used 7 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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