The graph shows the percentage of UK adolescents following a vegetarian diet. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features

The graph shows the percentage of UK adolescents following a vegetarian diet. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features
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The line graph depicts the proportion of UK teenagers eating
a
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apply
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vegetable food. Period for over 60 years, from 1960 to 2020. The graph
get
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the peak
at
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1980 for the highest
percent
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was 15%. After 1980, it decreased drastically to 6 % and
fuctuated
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fluctuated
fluctuate
fluctuates
from 1990 to 2000
then
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it increased
graduately
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gradually
to 10% in 2010 and remained
to
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2020. The percentage of UK adolescents following
diet
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a diet
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got
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the highest in 1980 and the lowest
at
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in
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the period between 1990 and 2000.
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