The graph shows the percentage of UK adolescents following a vegetarian diet. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features

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The line graph depicts the proportion of UK teenagers eating

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vegetable food. Period for over 60 years, from 1960 to 2020. The graph

get

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the peak

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1980 for the highest

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was 15%. After 1980, it decreased drastically to 6 % and

fuctuated

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fluctuated

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fluctuates

from 1990 to 2000

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it increased

graduately

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gradually

to 10% in 2010 and remained

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until

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2020. The percentage of UK adolescents following

diet

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a diet

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got

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the highest in 1980 and the lowest

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the period between 1990 and 2000.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

83 words

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The graph shows the percentage of UK adolescents following a vegetarian diet. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features

Some people believe that children should be allowed to stay at home and play until they are six or seven years old. Others believe that it is important for young children to go to school as soon as possible. What do you think are the advantages of attending school from a young age?

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