You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram gives information about the process of making carbonated drinks. Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The diagram gives information about the process of making carbonated drinks.

Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
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The illustration demonstrates how carbonated drinks are made.
Overall
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, it is a 5 stage, man-made, linear process. It begins with raw
water
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being cleaned and
finally
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results in drinks being delivered. First of all, in factories, raw
water
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goes through a long tube to filter and
water
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softener, where the percolated agua mixes with chemicals. After that, the accelerated through pump flow is heated in an electrical heater machine, the boiling steam
are
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is
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cooled through the cooling pipe and
then
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goes to a tank which has carbon dioxide inside. Following that, carbonated
water
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goes into a mixing tank which is connected to its colouring, syrup and flavour.
Subsequently
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,
this
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brew filters a second time. From
this
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, the liquid is bottled and canned, the almost finished product is labelled and put into boxes in factories.
Finally
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, the product is delivered to the supermarket and sold to the users.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "finally".
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the first paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words water with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 1 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the first paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • carbonated drinks
  • water cleaning
  • heating evaporation
  • carbonation
  • mixing tank
  • filtering
  • filling
  • packaging
  • raw water
  • filtration
  • softening
  • chemical treatment
  • heating
  • evaporated
  • carbon dioxide
  • coloring
  • sweeteners
  • flavorings
  • final beverage
  • impurities
  • bottles and cans
  • distributed
  • supermarkets
  • stores
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