You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among different age groups of residents in the UK in 2004. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The chart illustrates three different expenses of each
group
of people
seperated
by their ages in the United Kingdom in 2004. The chart shows in percentages.
Correct your spelling
separated
Overall
, it can be seen from the graph that entertainment, food, and drink seemed to follow similar
trend, which is Add an article
a similar
uptrend
, Add an article
an uptrend
while
resturant
and Correct your spelling
restaurants
hotel
seemed to be Fix the agreement mistake
hotels
opposite
, which is Correct article usage
the opposite
downtrend
along Correct article usage
a downtrend
people
age range.
Considering food and drink spending, it rose steadily from just over 5% for the Change noun form
people's
group
of under-30-year old to around 23% for the elders, who is
more than 76 years old. For entertainment expenditure, it was almost the same at nearly 6% for Change the verb form
are
people
under 45, then
increased gradually to the peak at around 23% in people
with age
Change preposition
aged
of
61 to 75 years old. Change preposition
apply
Finally
, it dropped to under 15% for oldest
Correct article usage
the oldest
people
.
On the contrary
, resturant
and hotel Correct your spelling
restaurant
expense
Fix the agreement mistake
expenses
was
at Change the verb form
were
peak
at just under 15% for Add an article
a peak
youngest
Correct article usage
the youngest
group
in society, then
minimally fell to nearly 12% for 46 to 60-year-old people
. However
, it dramatically dropped to around 3% for next
Correct article usage
the next
group
, then
rose to around 7% for the oldest group
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