You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among different age groups of residents in the UK in 2004. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among different age groups of residents in the UK in 2004.

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
The chart illustrates three different expenses of each
group
of
people
seperated
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separated
by their ages in the United Kingdom in 2004. The chart shows in percentages.
Overall
, it can be seen from the graph that entertainment, food, and drink seemed to follow
similar
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a similar
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trend, which is
uptrend
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an uptrend
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,
while
resturant
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restaurants
and
hotel
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hotels
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seemed to be
opposite
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the opposite
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, which is
downtrend
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a downtrend
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along
people
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people's
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age range. Considering food and drink spending, it rose steadily from just over 5% for the
group
of under-30-year old to around 23% for the elders, who
is
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are
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more than 76 years old. For entertainment expenditure, it was almost the same at nearly 6% for
people
under 45,
then
increased gradually to the peak at around 23% in
people
with age
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aged
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of
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apply
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61 to 75 years old.
Finally
, it dropped to under 15% for
oldest
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the oldest
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people
.
On the contrary
,
resturant
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restaurant
and hotel
expense
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expenses
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was
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were
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at
peak
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a peak
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at just under 15% for
youngest
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the youngest
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group
in society,
then
minimally fell to nearly 12% for 46 to 60-year-old
people
.
However
, it dramatically dropped to around 3% for
next
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the next
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group
,
then
rose to around 7% for the oldest
group
.
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