Employers sometimes ask people applying jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies and interests, and whether they are married or single. Some people say that this information may be useful and relevant. Others disagree. Discuss booth view and give your opinion.

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seekers are often
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asked
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their personal lives when they
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interviewed for
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new occupations. Some
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society stand with the following condition
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its tangibility for gaining practical
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while
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to believe it.
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and my personal
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exclusive
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are relied
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on the special needs of companies
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their work conditions.
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, News Media
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prefer unmarried or single workers for doing their tasks because
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practical for them to go abroad as soon as possible
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recent
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to release. Having significant
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might cancel them for getting
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independence
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better to know certain confidential knowledge of
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seekers so they will fit the
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's special treatment.
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choice for committing to creative
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like news media
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company
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companies
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.
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,
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opine that it is not recommended to be asked for particular
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if it is trivial to the
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description. Private issues should be protected as it is unrelated
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all
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sought-after
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information
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hobbies is not needed for
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a professional
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worker with decent
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or task
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because they did the
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from their experience or knowledge and not their personal preference.
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skills should be prioritized in every field more than any subjective tendencies. In conclusion, asking confidential questions in a work interview has
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to different reactions.
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some people agreed with that situation
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its practicality with
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descriprions
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descriptions
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situations,
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are refusing it because
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unrelated to the occupations. I believe that Human Resource Development should explain why they ask for private
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so
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seekers are willing to share it. Consent and trust
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pivotal between
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an individual
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and its
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institution.
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Ensure that the introduction and conclusion are clear and concisely present the main topic and your opinion.
Coherence and Cohesion
Develop logical paragraph structures that clearly distinguish between supporting points for each view and your own opinion, improving the clarity of arguments.
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Use a range of cohesive devices effectively to aid in the logical flow of the essay.
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