Employers sometimes ask people applying jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies and interests, and whether they are married or single. Some people say that this information may be useful and relevant. Others disagree. Discuss booth view and give your opinion.
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to
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job
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interview
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interviews
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on the special needs of companies Wrong verb form
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their work conditions. Change preposition
to maintain
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independence
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information
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job
description. Private issues should be protected as it is unrelated Use synonyms
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apply
all
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to
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occupations. Correct your spelling
sought-after
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skills should be prioritized in every field more than any subjective tendencies.
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others
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work-related
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Coherence and Cohesion
Ensure that the introduction and conclusion are clear and concisely present the main topic and your opinion.
Coherence and Cohesion
Develop logical paragraph structures that clearly distinguish between supporting points for each view and your own opinion, improving the clarity of arguments.
Coherence and Cohesion
Use a range of cohesive devices effectively to aid in the logical flow of the essay.
Task Achievement
Strictly adhere to formal language and avoid any informal language in expressions or idiomatic language that may not be appropriate in an academic essay.
Task Achievement
Expand on each main point by supporting it with specific and detailed examples to fully elaborate on the ideas presented.
Task Achievement
Make sure to fully address all parts of the prompt, including discussing both views and giving your opinion, to achieve a complete response.