The diagram below show how leather goods are producted. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant.
The given diagram illustrates how to make leather products.
Overall
, it can be seen that there are eleven stages.
In the initial stage, the animal skin will be moved into the first factory after being hang
in the air. Change the verb form
being hung
Then
, the staff will wash them in water and lime before soaking them in the same liquid but in a larger tank.
Next,
the skin will be flattened by a machine before soaking them again in the different mixture
Fix the agreement mistake
mixtures
such
as water and vegetable matter. After that, the roller will polish them. Once they done
all the stages, the second truck will bring them to the Add a missing verb
are done
last
factory where they can be manufactured in products, for example
, shoes or handbagsSubmitted by weezel on
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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