The graphs indicate the source of complaints about the Bank of America and the amount of time it takes to have the complaints resolved. Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graphs indicate the source of complaints about the Bank of America and the amount of time it takes to have the complaints resolved.

Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie chart illustrates the seven types of
complaints
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from
bank
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customers
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in the USA about its services,
whereas
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the table depicts the average time needed to solve the problem by the
bank
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from 2000 to 2004.
Overall
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, over the period given, the highest proportion of
complaints
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was from public
bank
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customers
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, whilst the lowest was the others. Turning to the information in more detail, we can see that 63 % of
bank
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complaints
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come from public users which is the highest presentation of
complaints
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among those
customers
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. Government agencies just donated 11 % of
complaints
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which is only ahead of out-of-state ( 10 %).
Bank
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also
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received 3 % of the
complaints
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from media and
bank
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employees and the rest came from other
customers
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only 2 %. In terms of the average time that the
bank
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needed to solve the problem decreased over 5 years. In 2000 banks needed almost 5,8
hours
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to solve the problems.
This
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figure
then
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increased to more than 6
hours
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in 2001 before rising again to 5
hours
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in 2002. The time needed by the
bank
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increased to almost 5.7
hours
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in 2003 and
then
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declined to almost 4, 3
hours
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at the end
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of the period.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words complaints, bank, customers, hours with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Customer service
  • Complaint resolution
  • Data trend
  • Source of complaints
  • Average handling time
  • Online platform
  • Telephone service
  • In-person interactions
  • Efficiency
  • Automated systems
  • Customer satisfaction
  • Bank's reputation
  • Improvements
  • Anomalies
  • Outliers
  • Benchmark
  • Resolution rate
  • Processing time
  • Service channels
  • Feedback mechanism
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