The first graph gives the number of passengers travelling by train in Sydney. The second graph provides information on the percentage of trains running on time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The first line
graph
given illustrates the amount of passengers
commuting by train in Sydney. The second graph
given shows the proportion of trains
running on time
.
Overall
, in the first graph
, it is obvious that the number of train passengers
increased over the period from 1995 to 2004. While
2001 had the most passengers
in the year, the opposite will be true for 1995. In the second graph
, we can easily see that the percentage of trains
running on time
has rapidly decreased over time
. The highest percentage of trains
running on time
appeared in 1999.
In 1995, Sydney had approximately 250 million passengers
who commuted by train which is the least in 9 years. However
, there was a significant rise in the number of passengers
, nearly 300 million people in 2001.
In 1999, there was about 93% of trains
running on time
in Sydney. Unfortunately, a dramatic drop happened, which turned the proportion of running on-time
trains
to just roughly 72% in 2004.Submitted by cathyngo1512 on
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