Two charts below show the percentage of qualified graduates in a particular country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Two charts below show the percentage of qualified graduates in a particular country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given pie
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charts
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illustrates
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illustrate
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the distribution of academic
degree
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graduates
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in 1980 and 2008. The
degree
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measured
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in
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and divided into six
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, there are
PhD
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Science
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, Masters
Science
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,
First
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Degree
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Arts
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, Masters
Arts
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,
PhD
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Arts
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and
First
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Degree
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Arts
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.
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, it can be clearly seen that in 1980 the majority of
graduates
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were from
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science
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a science
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background,
such
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as
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PhD
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a PhD
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of
Science
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,
Master
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of Sciences and
First
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degree
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of Sciences.
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proportion
were
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unchanged until 2008,
where
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when
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the
graduates
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from
science
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still
have
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the biggest percentage in total. In 1980, 61% of
student
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students
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were from
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a sciences
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sciences
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science
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background
graduates
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, with
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a Master
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Master
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degree
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as the highest,
First
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degree
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and
PhD
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following. Meanwhile, the rest of
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the percentage
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were from a quarter of
First
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Degree
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Arts
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, 12% were
Master
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of
Arts
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and a mere of
PhD
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of
Arts
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. In 2008, the
science
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degree
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were
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was
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still the biggest part,
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however
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however,
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some shift
occured
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occurred
. The percentage of
PhD
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Science
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experienced
a
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significant growth to 30%,
whereas
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first
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first-degree
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degree
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science
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shrinked
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to only a tenth.
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trend
also
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happened in
Arts
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major
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majors
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,
PhD
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of
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increased slightly
for
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by
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5% and
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first
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first-degree
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degree
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art
drop
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dropped
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to 11%.
Lastly
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, the
Master
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of
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and
Master
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of
Science
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remained unchanged.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words degree, graduates, phd, science, first, arts, master with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "unchanged" was used 2 times.
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