Two charts below show the percentage of qualified graduates in a particular country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given pie
chats
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charts
illustrates
the distribution of academic Correct subject-verb agreement
illustrate
degree
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graduates
in 1980 and 2008. The Use synonyms
degree
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measured
in Add a missing verb
is measured
percent
and divided into six Change the spelling
per cent
type
, there are Change to a plural noun
types
PhD
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Science
, Masters Use synonyms
Science
, Use synonyms
First
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Degree
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Arts
, Masters Use synonyms
Arts
, Use synonyms
PhD
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Arts
and Use synonyms
First
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Degree
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Arts
.
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Overall
, it can be clearly seen that in 1980 the majority of Linking Words
graduates
were from Use synonyms
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science
background, Add an article
a science
such
as Linking Words
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PhD
of Correct article usage
a PhD
Science
, Use synonyms
Master
of Sciences and Use synonyms
First
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degree
of Sciences. Use synonyms
This
proportion Linking Words
were
unchanged until 2008, Change the verb form
was
where
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when
graduates
from Use synonyms
science
still Use synonyms
have
the biggest percentage in total.
In 1980, 61% of Wrong verb form
had
student
were from Fix the agreement mistake
students
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a sciences
sciences
background Fix the agreement mistake
science
graduates
, with Use synonyms
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Add an article
a Master
Master
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Master's
degree
as the highest, Use synonyms
First
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degree
and Use synonyms
PhD
following. Meanwhile, the rest of Use synonyms
percentage
were from a quarter of Correct article usage
the percentage
First
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Degree
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Arts
, 12% were Use synonyms
Master
of Use synonyms
Arts
and a mere of Use synonyms
PhD
of Use synonyms
Arts
.
In 2008, the Use synonyms
science
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degree
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were
still the biggest part, Change the verb form
was
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however
some shift Add a comma
however,
occured
. The percentage of Correct your spelling
occurred
PhD
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Science
experienced Use synonyms
a
significant growth to 30%, Remove the article
apply
whereas
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first
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first-degree
degree
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science
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shrinked
to only a tenth. Correct your spelling
shrank
This
trend Linking Words
also
happened in Linking Words
Arts
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major
, Fix the agreement mistake
majors
PhD
of Use synonyms
Arts
increased slightly Use synonyms
for
5% and Change preposition
by
Use synonyms
first
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first-degree
degree
art Use synonyms
drop
to 11%. Wrong verb form
dropped
Lastly
, the Linking Words
Master
of Use synonyms
Arts
and Use synonyms
Master
of Use synonyms
Science
remained unchanged.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words degree, graduates, phd, science, first, arts, master with synonyms.
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