The bar chart shows expectations for change of European young people in the next 20 years in five different areas. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates forecasts about the change of
European
young generation in the next two decades in five sectors.
Correct article usage
the European
Overall
, the majority of sectors will get worse except people's communcation
and the worst deterioration is expected from air Correct your spelling
communication
quality
.
In the next 20 years, communication among people will get better for
above 60%, which is expected to be the most improved sector, Change preposition
at
whereas
air quality
forecasts show that quality
of the air will get better only over 20% and Correct article usage
the quality
other
80% will get worse. Health and Water Correct article usage
the other
quality
areas are expecting almost the same results each, improving for
above 40% and 40%, respectively.Expectations from food Change preposition
by
quality
are equal on each side, the
half of it will get better and the other half Correct article usage
apply
expected
to Add a missing verb
is expected
be deteriorated
.Change to the active voice
deteriorate
have deteriorated
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Vocabulary: Replace the words quality with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "change" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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