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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The following table and graph give information about the Gross Domestic Product (GDP) and employment sectors of a developing country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The following table and graph give information about the Gross Domestic Product (GDP) and employment sectors of a developing country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words
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The table compares the distribution of
employment
 and
GDP
 in 1992,
whereas
 the line graph represents the percentage of
GDP
 in different years.
Overall
,
GDP
 from servicers was always higher compared to other categories. Though there was a downward trend in the
GDP
 of
Services
 and Natural
resources
, the trend of the
GDP
 of
Industry
 followed an upward trend. The Highest
GDP
 came from
services
, especially from the hotel business at 37.4% and the lowest came from
industry
, which figure is 15.4%.
On the other hand
,
although
 the
GDP
 was the lowest in natural
resources
,
employment
 was the highest in
this
 category. Its contribution to
GDP
 was 19.2%, but
employment
 was 77.4%. The ratio of
employment
 vs
GDP
 was almost the same in the cases of
industry
 and government service. In 1986, the percentage of GDPs was 65% in
services
, and 25% in natural
resources
, but only 10% in
industry
. Even though the
industry
 started with the lowest
GDP
, it crossed the natural
resources
 after 1994 and doubled in 1995.
Services
 and natural
resources
 finished with the percentages of 55% and 18% respectively.
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