The charts show projections for global production by sector in 2040 and 2060. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The charts show projections for global production by sector in 2040 and 2060.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The pie charts above display the projected world productions in 2040 and in 2060.
Overall
, it is clear to see that the majority of productions are by services and manufacturing resources in both years.
Whereas
, sectors
such
as
Agriculture
,
Energy
and materials make the least contribution.
Moreover
, all sectors apart from
agriculture
and
energy
, will have a slight elevation in production. Services are the leading cause
for
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global waste in both 2040 and 2060;
the
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figure increasing by 1% from 40 to 41%.
This
is followed by manufacturing which will experience a 2% increase from 31 to 33 over the course of the 20 years. Info-Com Tech will
also
demonstrate a rise of 1%, the figures growing from 15 to 16 respectively.
On the other hand
, both
Agriculture
and
Energy
will decline over
this
time period. Out of all the sources,
Agriculture
will have the greatest fall from 4% to 1% in 2060.
This
is closely followed by
Energy
which will
also
decrease from 7 to 5. The generation of materials will have a small jump from 3 to 4.
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