The table illustrates the available income from each family and how it spends on food and outfits, while the pie charts represent the proportion of spending on those categories in 2010 and 2013.
Based on the data,
it is clear that
while
the total income of an average British family decreased between 2010 and 2013, the total amount of money spent on food
and clothing increased. Beside
that, British society spent Replace the word
Besides
much
money on Correct quantifier usage
a lot of
food
rather than on clothes
in both years. In 2010, an average British family earned £29,000, whereas
nearly half of that amount was used for food
and clothes
. However
, in 2013, the average income of a family in Britain decreased by £25,000, while
there was a growth of £1,000 in the expenditure for food
and clothes
.
Regarding the pie charts, the percentage Change preposition
of
for
spending on meat and fish was the highest of all categories in 2010, at 29 Change preposition
of
percent
, but three years later experienced a drop to 23 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
. In the same case, a downward trend was seen in the figure for Change the spelling
per cent
clothes
, from 15 percent
to 13 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
in 2013. Change the spelling
per cent
On the other hand
, people in Britain spend more money to consume
fruit, vegetables, and dairy products, as the figures went up 30 Change the verb form
consuming
percent
and 16 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
, respectively. Meanwhile, the proportion of spending on other foods remained unchanged at exactly 18%.Change the spelling
per cent
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