Two charts below show the percentage of qualified graduates in a particular country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given diagrams illustrate the changes
of
the proportion of five types of qualified graduates in a certain nation in 1980 and 2008. These graduates included students who studied Change preposition
in
first
Change preposition
for first
degrees
, master
Change noun form
master's
degrees
and PhD
degrees
.
It is evident that more students pursued higher education for master
Change noun form
master's
degrees
and PhD
degrees
than first
degrees
after 20 years.
The ratio of PhD
science witnessed the biggest increase from 13% in 1980 to 30% in 2008, followed by PhD
Arts with an
5% increment. Meanwhile, Masters Arts showed a Change the article
a
marginable
rise Correct your spelling
marginal
by
1 % in 2008.
In stark contrast, there was a significant decline Change preposition
of
for
the data Change preposition
in
of
Change preposition
for
first degree
Arts, dropping from 25% of qualified graduates in 1980 to 11% in 2008. Add a hyphen
first-degree
Similarly
, the ratio for first degree
science Add a hyphen
first-degree
also
experienced a dramatic decrease, which drops
to 10% in 2008 from 19% in 1980.
Regardless Wrong verb form
dropped
these
changes, the shares for masters’ science remained unchanged at 29% in these two years.Change preposition
of these
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