The graph below shows the population of India and China from the year 2000 to the present day with projections for growth to the year 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the
population
of two countries India and China from 2002 compared to the projections of the growth.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that both countries have increased their population
from
2000, Change preposition
since
Whereas
the population
dropped in 2003 from 1.5 billion
to 1.4 billion
in China.
In terms of the highest population
in 2000, china was on the top till 2030 as an expected projection. However
, the expected projections for growth in India's Population
from 2003 to 2050 will increase from 1.5 billion
to 1.6 billion
.
In conclusion, both countries Present the highest percentage of the population
worldwide, and as shown in the coming years there’s a potential for growth which may affect the global natural resources.Submitted by yassinm1211 on
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