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Band 5.5

You have decided to change your profession and want to resign from your current job. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter: • Tell him about your decision and its reasons; • Explain what you have learnt from your current job and how you feel about leaving it; • Ask for a letter of reference. Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ....,

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Dear Mr. Liton, I hope
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 finds you in good health and doing well. I am writing
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letter
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 to let you know that I am going to resign from my
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 effective from
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 of January, 2024. As you know
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I have been working in your esteemed organization as a human resource manager since 2018. It was really tough for me to
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 decision. The main reason
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quiting
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quitting
 my job is that
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within
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 one week, my family will be
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 from Chittagong to Dhaka
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our permanent residence. During
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 5-years long tenure, I have learned many things
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 as professionalism, time management, how to behave with people etc. I am really proud to be a part of
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 dynamic team with
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 working environment
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 organizational culture. Leaving
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 company really makes me feel sad. I am requesting you to issue a reference
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 based on my job description so that I can use
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letter
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 for searching
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suitable job in future. I am looking forward to
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 from you soon regarding
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 matter. Yours sincerely, Faisal
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coherence cohesion
Make sure your letter has a clear logical structure. The opening and closing are clear, but some paragraphs could be more focused and cohesive.
task response
For a higher grade in task achievement, elaborate on specific contributions or achievements in your role, and give more detailed reasons for leaving.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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