The best way to solve the traffic and transportation problem is to encourage people to live in cities rather than suburbs or countryside. What are the effects of rapid population growth in the city? How can the quality of life city dwellers be maintain?

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is congested,

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advice

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the citizens

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on

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suburbs

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the suburbs

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or rural

area

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. In

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will examine the effects that contribute towards population explosion in the

city

if

this

method

applied

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and propose some

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recommendations

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recommendation

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recommendations

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to keep the life quality of the

resident

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residents

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. One of the first

problem

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problems

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that may occur because of the population boom is

inflation

.

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, all primary needs to live in the

city

will be more expensive and

make

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people

can not afford it. Those basic needs that may

effect

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by the

inflation

are price of

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,

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of rent, school fees, electricity bills and groceries. The second issue is the domino effect from the first

problems

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, which is poverty and slum area increased,

as a result

of many

immigrant

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do not have sufficient

amout

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amount

of money to have

a

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property. To illustrate, Jakarta is the most dense population

city

in Indonesia,

therefore

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services

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are higher compared with

another

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other cities

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city

.

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,

this

city

is

also

the

most

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city

with the highest level of unemployment and poor

people

. A possible solution to keep

people

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well-being is subsidies from the government. As we know

that

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subsidies

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from

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.

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, it is

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the government

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government

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responsibilities

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responsibility

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to use public tax wisely

for

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prioritize the community interest. The tax can

be distribute

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to cut the price of public needs

such

as health, transportation and

government-property

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rent.

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,

this

approach can reduce

the

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inflation

undirecly

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indirectly

directly

and

people

can afford their essentials. In conclusion, pushing

the

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society

living

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in the

city

could

effect

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cause

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some serious

worry

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worries

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such

as

inflation

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can

be

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the

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trigger

of

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poverty.

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essay suggested that the solution to

this

issue is from

government

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the government

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which is subsidies for

people

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necessities.