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The charts give information about two genres of TV programmes watched by men and women and four different age groups in Australia.

The charts give information about two genres of TV programmes watched by men and women and four different age groups in Australia.
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The bar charts illustrates
that
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two genres of
TV
 programmes
such
 as
game
 shows and
relaity
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reality
 shows watched by male and female in four categories of the
age
 group people in Australia.
Overall
,
female
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females
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was
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had
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 the highest rate of
watch
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watching
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the
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reality
 shows on
TV
whereas
male
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males
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 watched more hours of
the
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game
 shies.
According to
 the bar chart shows that women was the highest watching hours of
the
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reality
 shows
rather
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than men which was 70% and around 38% respectively.
In contrast
, there is a slight difference between men and women
watched
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who watched
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game
 shows on
TV
 which was 60% and around 61%.
In addition
, above 45
age
 people were the highest watched of both the
TV
 shows as compared to other
age
 groups which was almost 70%.
Age
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The age
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 group of 16-24 folks had
watch
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watched
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 equally which was around 50 per cent. Between
25
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the 25
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 to 34
age
 group
was
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watched more
in
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reality
 shows than
game
 shows which was 60 and 40 per cent respectively.
Similarly
, 35-44
age
 people watched more
the
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apply
show examples
reality
 shows than
game
 shows which was 70% and 50% respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words tv, game, age, reality with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 11 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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