You have been doing some voluntary work to help your local community. However, now you are unable to continue doing this work. Write a letter to the manager of the organization where you have been working. In your letter: - Describe the work you have been doing - Explain why you can no longer do this work - Recommend another person who is interested in the work.

Dear Mathew I am writing today to express that I can not work with our charity organization , and kindly seek your approval in
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a lot during my tenure. I am grateful to you for providing me
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opportunity. I was mainly responsible for teaching complementary vocational computer courses as a part of our youth employment drive. I was conducting lectures offline and online regarding Web development, including educating children about the strategies to generate dynamic web pages and
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related computer coding. The reason why I can not continue working stems from the fact that I am shifting permanently
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native country. I have a family business back home and my father is retiring, so I need to go back to take care of our factory. , With that being said, I know a friend who is going to occupy my place , and he is immensely experienced and skilled in computer coming. He is very inspired to take my place and join
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society. I highly recommend him in case you want to consider him as my potential replacement. Thank you for your attention
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matter. I wish you all the best. Yours faithfully Rohit
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coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph contains a unique idea and expand on it for a clear structure. Avoid mixing multiple points in one paragraph.
coherence cohesion
Use a proper conventional opening and closing for formal letters. The current greeting and closing are informal for the context of a letter to a manager.
task achievement
While you've addressed the required points, expand on the details for each. Include more specifics about the work impact and the quality of your recommended replacement.
task achievement
Maintain an appropriate formal tone throughout the letter. Avoid casual language or contractions.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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