The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided map depicts the current industrial area in Norbiton city,
while
the other one informs the future construction plan for that site. It can be clearly seen that there will be massive changes around the
factory
area into the farmland. Currently, there are some
factory
blocks
which
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located in the
center
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point. On the north, there is
a
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farmland across the river,
while
the town is situated on the left-hand side of the
factory
. Turning to the future plans, the
factory
spot will be replaced by the construction of housing and some public facilities
such
as shops, medical
centre
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,
playground
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and
school
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. Another housing block is planned to
build
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in the farmland area and will be connected by a bridge across the river. There is no change around the town.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words factory with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • planned future development
  • factories
  • warehouses
  • railway line
  • shopping center
  • residential buildings
  • college
  • mixed-use zone
  • commercial
  • residential
  • educational
  • green spaces
  • pedestrian walkways
  • housing
  • community
  • retail services
  • revitalize
  • quality of life
  • vibrant
  • sustainable
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