The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided map depicts the current industrial area in Norbiton city,
while
the other one informs the future construction plan for that site. It can be clearly seen that there will be massive changes around the Linking Words
factory
area into the farmland.
Currently, there are some Use synonyms
factory
blocks Use synonyms
which
located in the Correct pronoun usage
apply
center
point. On the north, there is Change the spelling
centre
a
farmland across the river, Remove the article
apply
while
the town is situated on the left-hand side of the Linking Words
factory
.
Turning to the future plans, the Use synonyms
factory
spot will be replaced by the construction of housing and some public facilities Use synonyms
such
as shops, medical Linking Words
centre
, Fix the agreement mistake
centres
playground
and Fix the agreement mistake
playgrounds
school
. Another housing block is planned to Fix the agreement mistake
schools
build
in the farmland area and will be connected by a bridge across the river. There is no change around the town.Wrong verb form
be built
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words factory with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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