The chart shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The chart shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational
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in the UK in 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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Linking words: Add linking words.
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
I am writing this letter to you because I heard somewhere that you are hiring. Furthermore, I am a student and I am doing a crash course which takes 4 hours every day, after attending class I am totally free. So, I am looking for this vacancy.
In order to achieve gender equality in universities, some argue that there should be an equal amount of male and female students in each major. However, I disagree with the statement as it may result in unfair decisions to meet the gender requirements and universities should consider the academic abilities of the candidates more instead of the gender.
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