the bar chart shows the percentage of males and females aged 18-20 in a city who participated in a various activities in ine month in 2015.
The bar graph provides information on the proportion of
men
and women
who engaged in several activities at the age of 18 - 20 in a city in one month in the year 2005. Overall
, football was men
's favourite sport
, while
most women
preferred cycling. Nevertheless
, hockey was the least popular sport
among both genders.
With regards to men
's favourite sport
, 50% of them participated in football, conversely
, women
's percentage was only 15. Likewise
, a similar proportion resulted in basketball, above 30 per cent and 10 per cent for both genders respectively.
Cycling and swimming were women
's most preferred sport
. 40% of females participated in cycling, while
the percentage of males was slightly less at 35%. Moreover
, in terms of swimming 35% of women
joined that activity. In contrast
, only 20% of men
joined it. Hockey was the less popular sport
among males and females at almost 10 per cent and less than 10 respectively.Submitted by asoom on
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