the bar chart shows the percentage of males and females aged 18-20 in a city who participated in a various activities in ine month in 2015.
The bar graph provides information on the proportion of
men
and Use synonyms
women
who engaged in several activities at the age of 18 - 20 in a city in one month in the year 2005. Use synonyms
Overall
, football was Linking Words
men
's favourite Use synonyms
sport
, Use synonyms
while
most Linking Words
women
preferred cycling. Use synonyms
Nevertheless
, hockey was the least popular Linking Words
sport
among both genders.
With regards to Use synonyms
men
's favourite Use synonyms
sport
, 50% of them participated in football, Use synonyms
conversely
, Linking Words
women
's percentage was only 15. Use synonyms
Likewise
, a similar proportion resulted in basketball, above 30 per cent and 10 per cent for both genders respectively.
Cycling and swimming were Linking Words
women
's most preferred Use synonyms
sport
. 40% of females participated in cycling, Use synonyms
while
the percentage of males was slightly less at 35%. Linking Words
Moreover
, in terms of swimming 35% of Linking Words
women
joined that activity. Use synonyms
In contrast
, only 20% of Linking Words
men
joined it. Hockey was the less popular Use synonyms
sport
among males and females at almost 10 per cent and less than 10 respectively.Use synonyms
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