The map below shows the development of the town of Stromer between 1995 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The maps
illustrates
the construction of the city of Stromer between 1995 and the present day.
Change the verb form
illustrate
Overall
, the town
went through drastic changes and there were made a lots
of facilities for citizens to make their life better.
In 1995, Correct the article-noun agreement
a lot
lots
the
big part of the Correct article usage
a
town
were
forest and farmland and only shops.In Correct subject-verb agreement
was
north
area of the Add an article
the north
town
was constructed airport
and on the left side of Correct article usage
an airport
this
were built two apartments,
and two-thirds of the forest has been cleared.Remove the comma
apply
Furthermore
, in the center
of the Change the spelling
centre
town
was built new
school and the number of shops Add an article
a new
was
increased and they Unnecessary verb
apply
sourround
the school.
Another important change is Correct your spelling
surround
surrounded
area
of farmland is reduced in size and now it's only occupying only a quarter of its original expanse. Add an article
an area
the area
Also
, houses in the past were located in the north of the city , but now all houses can be found in east south of the Stromer.Submitted by forcookiearu on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words town with synonyms.
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