The map below shows the development of the town of Stromer between 1995 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The map below shows the development of the town of Stromer between 1995 and now.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The maps
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the construction of the city of Stromer between 1995 and the present day.
Overall
, the
town
went through drastic changes and there were made
a lots
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of facilities for citizens to make their life better. In 1995,
the
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big part of the
town
were
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forest and farmland and only shops.In
north
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area of the
town
was constructed
airport
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and on the left side of
this
were built two apartments
,
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and two-thirds of the forest has been cleared.
Furthermore
, in the
center
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of the
town
was built
new
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school and the number of shops
was
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increased and they
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the school. Another important change is
area
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of farmland is reduced in size and now it's only occupying only a quarter of its original expanse.
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, houses in the past were located in the north of the city , but now all houses can be found in east south of the Stromer.
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