Write a letter to the Facebook manager about your payment.
Dear Sir,
I am writing
this
letter to express my dissatisfaction regarding the payment I made to verify my Facebook
account
. I have not received a refund for the amount I paid.
on September 20th and 21st,2023. I attempted to verify my Facebook
profile twice, which resulted in BDT 1920 + VAT being deducted from my bank account
. However
, my Facebook
account
was not verified.
You did not provide my BDT 1920+Vat. It did
not Verb problem
was
credit
to my bank Wrong verb form
credited
account
. What could I do? It has been on the 20th and 21st of September 2023.
Facebook
authorities took the bill 3 times in the month of September 2023.
Thank you for your attention to this
matter.
I hope that you will refund my money. Please send it to me immediately.
Yours faithfully,
Sayeed Ahmed
from Bangladesh.Submitted by sayeedbinbashir on
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that the letter has a clear introductory statement, concise body paragraphs, and a summarizing conclusion. The text could benefit from clearer paragraphing and more explicit statement of the intent and specific request.
task achievement
Try to maintain a polite and formal tone consistently throughout the letter. Be clear about the action you expect from the manager, including timelines, and ensure you provide necessary details such as specific dates and amounts.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.