The table below shows the proportion of different categorie of families living in poverty in Australia in 1999. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
A quick glance at the table illustrates what proportion of six different classifications of households living stricken by
poverty
in Australia in 1999.
By and large, by far the highest proportion of households were allocated 21
% of 232,000 sole parents Change preposition
to 21
while
4% of 48,000 aged couples were relatively well stricken by poverty
.
In terms of taking noteworthy data from the table, there were noticeable modifications in who had an
offspring and who had Correct article usage
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not
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offspring
In other words
, it is experienced that people with an
offspring tend to become stricken by Correct article usage
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poverty
. As for households without children, the highest percentage were stricken by poverty
in 1999.
With regards to taking a look at another feature, the proportion of classes of families who dominate relatively less stricken to
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poverty
in Australia in 1999 was aged couples.Submitted by khannasaikhanbayar on
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