the bar chart shows the percentage of males and females aged 18-20 in a city who participated in a various activities in ine month in 2015.

the bar chart shows the percentage of males and females aged 18-20 in a city who participated in a various activities in ine month in 2015.
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The chart displays the portion of men and women between the age of 18-20, who participated in different activities,
such
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as basketball, cycling, football, swimming and hockey in 2015.
Overall
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, the most played sport
then
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was football, which was especially trendy among males.
Also
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, hockey had the smallest percentage among both sexes.
Firstly
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, the most taken sports as an activity among females were cycling and swimming, at 40% and approximately 35%, respectively.
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, male portions were only about 35% in cycling and 20% in swimming activities.
Secondly
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, in the other three activities, the percentage of men was larger. In basketball and football,
difference
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was huge, by nearly 20% and around 40%, respectively.
Nevertheless
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, hockey had a small number of participating individuals in both genders.
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