The diagram below shows how rain water is collected and then treated to be used as drinking water in an Australian town. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The given diagram illustrates how an Australian town
collect
Change the verb form
collects
rain
Correct your spelling
rainwater
water
and treat
Correct subject-verb agreement
treats
to
be used.
Looking from the Correct pronoun usage
it to
overall
perspective, it is apparent that this
operation has 6 steps. Beginning with collect
Wrong verb form
collecting
water
from drain
Correct article usage
the drain
ending
with Correct word choice
and ending
deliver
treated Change the verb form
delivering
water
to use.
In the first step, water
from rains
Fix the agreement mistake
rain
are
gathered by drains, which are located on Change the verb form
is
Correct article usage
the houses
houses
roof. Change noun form
house's
Then
, the water
following
the underground drain system to Wrong verb form
follows
water
filter, where Correct article usage
the water
water
is clarified before it is delivered to the storage.
In the storage, water
is continued to go to the place called water
treatment. Thereafter
, water
is treated second
Correct article usage
a second
times
by a machine, which Fix the agreement mistake
time
is used
appropriate chemicals to Wrong verb form
uses
converted
dirty Change the form of the verb
convert
water
into clean water
that can be used to drink. As a result
, clean water
is transported into the local houses and serve
their demands.Correct subject-verb agreement
serves
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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