The line graph compares the average number of people in the UK traveling daily by car, bus and train over a period of 60 years.
The picture illustrates
amount
of Add an article
the amount
people
in the UK using Use synonyms
car
, bus, and train for daily activity within 60 years. Use synonyms
Overall
, Linking Words
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car
Fix the agreement mistake
cars
was
the highest Verb problem
had
users
with a significant Use synonyms
increased
.
In 1970, there were just under 6 Replace the word
increase
billions
Change to singular
billion
people
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used
Wrong verb form
who were using
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car
and it increased that added around 2 Fix the agreement mistake
cars
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millions
Change to singular
million
people
in 2000. Use synonyms
Moreover
, it significantly rose Linking Words
among
30 years and it will Change preposition
in
reached
a peak at 9 Change the verb form
reach
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millions
in 2030.
Change to singular
million
On the other hand
, the Linking Words
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users
transportation Change to a genitive case
user's
users'
of
bus gradually decreased which Change preposition
by
start
from approximately 4 Wrong verb form
started
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millions
Change to singular
million
people
. Use synonyms
At the end
of the line graph, it will reach the lowest number of Linking Words
users
among the three transportation in 2030 which Use synonyms
stand
at 3 Correct subject-verb agreement
stands
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millions
Change to singular
million
people
.
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Last
but not least, around 2 Linking Words
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millions human
used Fix the agreement mistake
million humans
train
to move from side to side of Fix the agreement mistake
trains
country
in Britain. Just like Add an article
the country
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car
, train Add an article
a car
users
went up and reached 3 Use synonyms
billions
Change to singular
billion
people
in 2000 but it was stagnant over 10 years. Use synonyms
Then
increased for more than 1 Linking Words
Use synonyms
millions
Change to singular
million
people
in 2030.Use synonyms
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