The line graph compares the average number of people in the UK traveling daily by car, bus and train over a period of 60 years.
The picture illustrates
amount
of Add an article
the amount
people
in the UK using car
, bus, and train for daily activity within 60 years. Overall
, car
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cars
was
the highest Verb problem
had
users
with a significant increased
.
In 1970, there were just under 6 Replace the word
increase
billions
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billion
people
used
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who were using
car
and it increased that added around 2 Fix the agreement mistake
cars
millions
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million
people
in 2000. Moreover
, it significantly rose among
30 years and it will Change preposition
in
reached
a peak at 9 Change the verb form
reach
millions
in 2030.
Change to singular
million
On the other hand
, the users
transportation Change to a genitive case
user's
users'
of
bus gradually decreased which Change preposition
by
start
from approximately 4 Wrong verb form
started
millions
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million
people
. At the end
of the line graph, it will reach the lowest number of users
among the three transportation in 2030 which stand
at 3 Correct subject-verb agreement
stands
millions
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million
people
.
Last
but not least, around 2 millions human
used Fix the agreement mistake
million humans
train
to move from side to side of Fix the agreement mistake
trains
country
in Britain. Just like Add an article
the country
car
, train Add an article
a car
users
went up and reached 3 billions
Change to singular
billion
people
in 2000 but it was stagnant over 10 years. Then
increased for more than 1 millions
Change to singular
million
people
in 2030.Submitted by joyapakpahan on
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