The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.

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cement

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is consumed to produce strong for building purposes.

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mix

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four

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substances.

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production

making

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cyclical

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progression of six stages

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cement

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of cement

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.

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,

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mix

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be mixed

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with some Water, Sand and Gravel and

pour

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poured

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into the mixer. Looking at the details, with regards

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production and how

manufacture

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with substances. First Limestone, clay, crusher and powder

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mixer

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a mixer

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appliance. After that, substances

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with

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heater

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grinder

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and

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powder.

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,

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should

bags

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by

factory

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for

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strong

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building

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buildings

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. Focusing on concrete production, concrete

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must

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%10 water, %15

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, %25 sand and %50 gravel actually small stones with each other.

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, int

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apply

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o the concrete mixer appliance

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make concrete

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e .