In many countries today there are many highly qualified graduates without employment. What factors may have caused this situation and what, in your opinion, can/should be done about it?

In today’s world, more and more people who graduate with high qualifications now become unemployed. In my opinion, the reasons for

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situation are the lack of work-related

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and the high

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in these adults and the solution is to add more soft skill courses into universities’

curriculum

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. The first cause for

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trend is the lack of essential soft

skills

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that are required for the workspace. Employers now require their employees to have several sets of

skills

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academic knowledge in order to

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job

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requirements.

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, despite their profound knowledge of the chosen field, graduates with high-level diplomas often have inadequate abilities in other areas

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as language, computer

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, communication and self-management to be successful in the modern workplace. Another reason for the unemployment in adults who have high-level education is that, more often than not, they have great expectations about jobs and

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environment. As their diplomas involve a significant amount of time and money, these employees expect to find

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positions with high

salary

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and competence extra benefits like leave days, insurance, yearly

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and travel

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can hamper them from finding

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suitable roles as not every company can offer that with a new employee. In my opinion, the solution

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trend is to support students with essential, work-related soft

skills

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during their course.

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will ensure that graduates can have sufficient

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,

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their own chosen field’s knowledge, to

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their future

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requirements.

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, more universities and colleges in Vietnam now require their students to have an international qualification in language before graduating. They

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host several workshops to share tips and instruct their students about how to write impressive work portfolios, how to manage time

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working and how to communicate effectively in the workplace. It’s clear that graduates from these institutions tend to have better chances to have a good

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position in the future. In conclusion, many adults with

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diplomas now suffer from unemployment because they don’t have essential

skills

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for the workplace

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having

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great requirements for their jobs.

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situation can be solved by incorporating soft skill courses into students’ curriculum

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university.