The table below gives information about the daily cost of water per person in five different countries. (Figures are based on the minimum daily requirement per peron of 11.5 litres.) Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The table compares the

price

water

needed for everyday routine for each individual in different countries

in addition

to cost as

percenrage

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percentage

of average daily wage. First of all, we can see there

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are

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significant variable prices to overcome

water

demand in different parts of the world.

For example

, Tanzania and

uganda

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Uganda

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have the most expensive

water

price

which are 6.4 and 4.1 cents per person

while

the UK and the US

has

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the lowest

price

equal to 1.3 and 0.85 cents, respectively.

In addition

, increasing the

price

increases the percentage of

average

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daily cost

pays

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paid

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for

water

. As we can see, it is 5.7% in Tanzania but is just 0.006% in the US for each

individuals

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individual

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To sum up

water

has various

price

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prices

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diffeent

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different

part

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parts

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the

word

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world

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which can be one of

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the cheapes

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cheapes

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cheapest

or one of the most expensive

material

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materials

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according to

the

counry

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country

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

148 words

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