The given below pie chart shows the cultural and leisure Activities amongst boys’ and girls’. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.write at least 150 words.
The two pie charts
illustrated
the different types of leisure and cultural activities among Wrong verb form
illustrate
the
Correct article usage
apply
boys
and girls
.
The largest activity of boys
who play computer games constitutes about 34% while
for girls
its
two times less than Replace the word
it's
it is
boys
. Meanwhile, girls
prefer to read more than boys
with about 21%. Notably,for
an almost equal proportion of both Change preposition
apply
boys
and girls
have chosen to listen
music for 10%.
Add the preposition
listen to
However
,unlike boys
who play soccer and ride skateboard
Fix the agreement mistake
skateboards
girls
enjoy doing gymanstics
and netball with about 11% to 15%. Correct your spelling
gymnastics
Morover
, Correct your spelling
Moreover
girls
also
perform dance
Add an article
a dance
while
boys
like to play soccer with about asame
proportion of about 27%.
In a nutshell, Correct your spelling
same
girls
and boys
have different tastes of
Change preposition
in
lesuire
and Correct your spelling
leisure
cuultural
activities but are done in the same proportion.But Correct your spelling
cultural
also
they both have similar activities like listening to music.Submitted by begumsyeda442 on
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words boys, girls with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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