The pie charts below show energy production in Spain in 2008 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given chart illustrates how many percentages of different types of
energy
made
up in total power Add a missing verb
were made
production
between 2008 and 2017 in Spain. There are five principal categories of energy
production
. While
nuclear, gas
, renewables and other production
experienced some increases, oil
and coal had opposite trends.
Oil
, coal, and gas
played main
Change the article
the main
role
of Fix the agreement mistake
roles
energy
sources. In 2008, coal was
Verb problem
apply
account
for 28% which was the highest portion Wrong verb form
accounted
in
Change preposition
of
energy
production
. However
, the figure dropped significantly by 11% in 2017 so coal lost its number one position to oil
and gas
. There was a slight decrease in number
of Change the article
a number
the number
oil
manufacturing which was 27% and 23% in 2008 and 2017 respectively. On the other hand
, gas
section witnessed a Correct article usage
the gas
little
climb Correct word choice
small
by
1%.
Nuclear and renewables were minor sections of power’s manufacturing in both years. We can clearly see that people in Spain tend to use more renewable Change preposition
of
energy
. As a
proof Correct article usage
apply
that
renewables rose moderately by 7% and nuclear’s number Correct word choice
apply
also
climbed by 6% in 2017. Other minor part
of Change the wording
Another minor part
Other minor parts
energy
production
shared the same trend which increased from 3% to 6% in 2017.Submitted by jessica852258 on
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, production, gas, oil with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "climb" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increases" was used 2 times.
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